Nice stuff!
Nice stuff!
Nice stuff!
Nice stuff!
really nice man
Love the transition from the radio/monologue to the story
I LOVE YOU MAN.
love it
love it! so cool to see... hear something longer! some nice bits in there. sweetly produced and everything. like listening to a nice (quite silly) radio drama.
only thing is all the jokes were just on the silliness of it being santa being played straight. I kind of wish it either had more other jokes or was actually serious.
Still loved it tho!
Yeah, it's a strange mix of comedy and drama. I suppose when I made it, I figured the circumstances at the foundation of the story were ridiculous enough, that piling on the melodrama would really just amplify the silliness. In the end, I think I possibly pulled it too far back into drama.
O-ho ho ho ho!
So I said, if you can't handle Wall Street, then maybe you should be on THE street instead!
I love you, man!
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Love it!
Like someone else said, it sounds a little like it could be the backing for a j-pop song. But works really nicely as an ambient track too.
Sweet production. Love the vibe when the drums first come in.
it's really weird, no matter what genre I end up doing people always always say my stuff sounds like video games or j-pop. I am cursed lol.
I must actually be a Japanese person stuck in a white person's body.
Cool atmosphere
I liked the opening. Reminded me of the opening to Akira. Very atmospheric and dark.
The sax sounded really out of place to me. With some of the notes sounding random and the overall sax sound not really fitting in. The melody around 1:50 sounds better tho.
You have some ideas in it and a nice atmosphere in parts, but the instrument sounds where a deal breaker for me.
Yeah, i'm trying to figure the best sounds to use, and there really aren't many good sounds to use in the demo, and i like the sax. I'll try using maybe a string instrument. But it's hard finding a good free VST that i like. Thanks for the review.
Out of key guitar part?
I agree with firemaker60, it's a pretty cool song. Nice, mellow and a cool laid back feel.
But that part at around 0:38 - 1:05 does sound totally out of key and horrible. Nice song, but that's a deal breaker for me.
Yes, the guitar part is horrible, but that was on purpose basically. I wanted to make the song pretty weird and awkward, but I guess that didn't work, lol.
Too random
Sounds far too random. Hard to see what you're going for.
Would be beter if it was simpler but with more of a point and beat or something
A point? The point is that I'm wearing white shoes, motherfucker! And that's all the shit you need to know.
A beat? Can't you read, n***a? 7/4 and 19/8. Until you can learn to tap your foot in polyrhythm, don't be dissin' my shit, yo.
On that note, your criticism is very much appreciated, and I will definitely maybe take your advice.
Really needs more
The sound quality and mixing could use a little work. But you've got some fun ideas.
Again, it sounds like it'd fit better within a bigger song. You could even combine the two songs you've uploaded into one and it might sounds pretty cool.
you couldn't have said it any better, in fact the two songs are part of the same song. this is actually just a snippet of a much bigger song at about 5 mins long. be looking forward to it in about 3 months!
I make music and animations
Age 36
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National Film & TV School
Sheffield, England
Joined on 11/5/01