Score: 8

"Keep them coming!"

submission: The Lost Lake

date: October 2, 2009

I saw "Well That Was Easy" back when you first submitted it. Cool to see more projects by you :)

While the graphics weren't great, it's got a fun story that feels told stronger than a lot of other flash here. Keep them coming!

Score: 8

"Sweet fight movie"

submission: Pokemon Hunter

date: May 11, 2009

I loved the life bar idea. A cool stylish touch :)
The attacks all looked cool and there were some cool ideas in it. The cool camera angles and movements of the Pokemon really helped too.

Some crit:
The music felt a little lacking. At first I thought I'd accidentally turned the bass off, but then realize it was just the song. It's really missing that 'punch' it needs.

Some parts towards the beginning when there are loads of Pokemon fighting, it feels very crowded and is a little hard to follow. If the colours of the enemy Pokemon were changed to slightly duller then the main Pokemon would stand out more and it'd be much funner to follow.

Overall a cool flash! It's nice to see a more serious Pokemon movie done well :) 'grats on the daily feature and front page :D

Score: 7

"Nice :)"

submission: Well, That Was Easy

date: March 7, 2009

Nice :) While the graphics and animation weren't so great, the story telling had some fun ideas and there were some nice cues to the music. Also the setting worked well for the animation style so the quality was less of a big deal.

You had some decent syncs with the music cues. I suggest you work on leaving less blank spaces between the cues for future though, since there were parts where you'd stay on one shot for a while and you could tell it was just waiting for the cue to happen. If you worked on making those parts interesting too then it'd greatly improve your flashes :)

The story didn't really feel finished, but it was fun to watch. Also, nice use of all the Franz music.

I enjoyed it! And congrats on the weekly 13th place! If this is your first proper flash then I'm looking forward to seeing your second and onwards :)

Score: 7

"(I can never think what to put here)"

submission: KILLROY

date: April 10, 2006

The graphics were VERY uneven. Some bit looked really great (the shots of landscape were a joy to look at), but then other bits look like someone who's just found flash did them.

Very good sence of style. But brung down by the graphics in some parts. The chace was pretty boring. But there were some really great shots dotted around the movie.

The music was good. But the voice and sound effects were horrible.

Very hard to judge this one. Even though it's incredibly uneven, it flows well and even when you're taken out of the movie by the bad bits, you can jump right back in and be fine.

You've got some talent, just focus on making your films on the same level more.

Score: 7

"(I can never think what to put here)"

submission: Fire and Ice

date: April 8, 2006

Very good movie. You can see the work and love that went into this.

The style makes it interesting to watch, the story is predictable but well told. The alien and it's ship are well thought out and it seems like there's a back story and reason.

The music does what it needs and adds a lot to the style and feel. The style of the music is spot on. It would be good if it went with the movie and heightened some scenes. But it still did what it needed.

It's kind of weird the way there are no people or cars when the alien is looking at how earth got like that. It's also very jarring when the music stops and the screen goes black. It seems like it's over but starts up again. It takes you out of it a little.

Over all: 7.5/10 - A movie that interesting to watch, has a good theme/point and really sucks you in. Good luck with future projects. I look forward to them!

Score: 5

"(I can never think what to put here)"

submission: -The Potato-

date: April 8, 2006

It's really hard to watch the bits with the blocky animation. Really, it looks like it's 8 fps sometimes. Also there are a few boring bits were it's just the potato bouncing for ages.

Other then that, pretty cute. Nice idea. Keep it up! Just try putting a bit more work into animation.

Score: 5

"(I can never think what to put here)"

submission: Please

date: April 7, 2006

I know the character were meant to be simple, but it comes off more as inexperienced rather then intentionally simple. Still, it's a very cohesive style for the whole movie.

It was pretty annoying to watch though. It was all just very cheesy and kind of a pain to watch.

I think the twist was very good though, since you kept to the style very well it comes as unexpected. I also have respect for you for the way you showed it. You showed exactly what needed to be showed. If you'd done any more or any less it would have ruined it, but you got it spot on. Plus it's a very good message.

Even though I personally didn't like it. It was done well and you illustrated your message well and with class. I tell you are going to do some really special movies if you keep at it. Nice work.

Score: 5

"..."

submission: The Dying Neuron

date: February 1, 2006

It kind of reminds me of when I did 13a. You've got a good idea but you don't yet have the experience in flash to forfill the ideas full potential.
It's still worlds a head of most of the crap on this site. Keep on going with flash. I'm sure you'll come out with something truly great!

Score: 9

"Great Sequel!"

submission: Bass Strikes Back 2

date: October 23, 2004

Brilliant movie! The action was excellently choreographed and exciting to watch and the animation was very easy on the eyes. And this is comming from someone who doesn't like sprites!
Very good work, can't wait for the next one!

Score: 7

"...It lives."

submission: The Price of Greed

date: June 6, 2004

Wow. You're still alive.
The movie is pretty funny. I like the way you broke one or two of the "rules" of flash movies. But other then that there wasn't much else that this movie had to offer. Very good for a quickie tho.
How are you getting on with Wicked Zero?