Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Do Not Feed The Alligator

date: October 21, 2009

Congrats on the grand prize! I entered as well but didn't get anything.

The short is great. Nice animation style, silly joke. I hope the longer version with Nick goes well!

Score: 8

"Keep them coming!"

submission: The Lost Lake

date: October 2, 2009

I saw "Well That Was Easy" back when you first submitted it. Cool to see more projects by you :)

While the graphics weren't great, it's got a fun story that feels told stronger than a lot of other flash here. Keep them coming!

Score: 9

"Great game."

submission: Little Wheel

date: June 26, 2009

Great game. The style and concept are the best things about it.
It was too easy though. It mostly felt like a story book where you had to click to turn the page or something. There really needed to be more puzzles with how to use the items together and such.
Still very enjoyable though.

Score: 8

"Haha, fun stuff."

submission: Three Wishes

date: May 11, 2009

Sounds like a fun 24 hour project :D Did you plan it or just decide "Let's do one... now!"?
Nice animation and pretty funny. Both the character's personalities were the best parts of the movie. The body language really added to it :)

I feel the ending could have been a better joke though. It was worth a little chuckle, but it could have been more.

You could have used a few wide shots to establish the scene more. If you added one at the beginning and when the car comes in are were I think it'd make the movie feel far more clear.

Fun stuff, would be nice to see another :)

Score: 8

"Sweet fight movie"

submission: Pokemon Hunter

date: May 11, 2009

I loved the life bar idea. A cool stylish touch :)
The attacks all looked cool and there were some cool ideas in it. The cool camera angles and movements of the Pokemon really helped too.

Some crit:
The music felt a little lacking. At first I thought I'd accidentally turned the bass off, but then realize it was just the song. It's really missing that 'punch' it needs.

Some parts towards the beginning when there are loads of Pokemon fighting, it feels very crowded and is a little hard to follow. If the colours of the enemy Pokemon were changed to slightly duller then the main Pokemon would stand out more and it'd be much funner to follow.

Overall a cool flash! It's nice to see a more serious Pokemon movie done well :) 'grats on the daily feature and front page :D

Score: 7

"nice"

submission: Gorillaz - Murdoc's Gift

date: May 7, 2009

I liked the animation.
It'd be a lot better if you stuck with one or two songs rather than changing it so much. It breaks the mood and flow up a lot.
Fun tho :)

Score: 1

"No content"

submission: Creeper test

date: April 24, 2009

Newgrounds is for finished work, not tests. There has to be some content to the work or there's no point in anyone watching it.

I'd defiantly suggest fixing the white screen problem for future too. You should try to make there be no obstacles to the viewers watching your film, otherwise they may stop watching before your film has even started.

The test it's self looked ok. Just try putting the idea in a proper movie?

Score: 3

"It's a comedy, right?"

submission: Press Start: Awakening

date: April 24, 2009

The voices where decent quality. But there weren't really any jokes.
There were the odd one or two, but it felt more like you were trying to tell part of a story and added in a joke, rather than it being a comedy movie.

Also, making the graphics better would really improve the movie.

Score: 7

"Nice story"

submission: The Invisibles

date: April 23, 2009

While the graphics weren't amazing, it's great to see more actual story telling on Newgrounds.

Looking forward to more!

Score: 4

"Fun idea"

submission: When The Bomb Goes Off

date: April 23, 2009

I like the idea. It's funny and gives more of a story/setting that just "Do X in 5 seconds because this is a game".

My main problem was that most of the time is wasn't clear what you had to do. You were dropped in and instantly the count down is there and it takes you a second or two to orientate your self and by that time you only have 2-3 seconds to complete the task. Which usually isn't enough (Especially since it takes so long to land after jumping).

So if you made it clearer what you had to do or gave slightly longer or something it'd help a lot.

I liked the way most of the things were so mundane. The computer game one was great X)

It'd be cool to see another version that's a clearer and maybe with a bit better graphics :)